Good use of instrumentation, very pretty notes and close to the theme.

On to the points you could push this even further with. Panning: you're working with an orchestra now, which means you have sections and these sections have physical locations on stage, keep those in mind; for example put the strings a little to the left, the woodwinds to the right, percussion in the rear and brass front and center. Bonus points for a choir. Dynamics aka volume: your balance is spot on, but the entire orchestra plays all notes at the same volume aside from the intro, it's fine if you let a section mellow out for a bit at some points without killing them. Lastly, tempo: maybe the piece is too short to fully make use of it, but you could slow down a few phrases to build stronger tension or extra relief.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have to use these points for my own work.

Good use of instrumentation, very pretty notes and close to the theme. On to the points you could push this even further with. Panning: you're working with an orchestra now, which means you have sections and these sections have physical locations on stage, keep those in mind; for example put the strings a little to the left, the woodwinds to the right, percussion in the rear and brass front and center. Bonus points for a choir. Dynamics aka volume: your balance is spot on, but the entire orchestra plays all notes at the same volume aside from the intro, it's fine if you let a section mellow out for a bit at some points without killing them. Lastly, tempo: maybe the piece is too short to fully make use of it, but you could slow down a few phrases to build stronger tension or extra relief. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have to use these points for my own work.

Sweet tune! Didn’t think it was too THICC; a very solid and memorable overworld theme

Sweet tune! Didn’t think it was too THICC; a very solid and memorable overworld theme :)

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Heroic and anthemic. The definitions of THICC I googled don't seem to fit at all ::)

Heroic and anthemic. The definitions of THICC I googled don't seem to fit at all ::)

That intro is the perfect way to create a wide sense of space - reminds me of Minimal by Isak Bjorn Hedlund. Great job with the orchestral sounds, your arrangement style is really solid

That intro is the perfect way to create a wide sense of space - reminds me of Minimal by Isak Bjorn Hedlund. Great job with the orchestral sounds, your arrangement style is really solid <3

Goodness gracious I LOVE these strings.  I really need to learn how to get on this level.  WOW.  So beautiful.

What was that sound at the end?

LOL JIM

Goodness gracious I LOVE these strings. I really need to learn how to get on this level. WOW. So beautiful. What was that sound at the end? [quote=Jim Wood]The definitions of THICC I googled don't seem to fit at all ::)[/quote] LOL JIM

Cheers for the feedback my dude, definitely have been tweaking velocity since then and it's helped tons!

Thank you Was worried I overcompressed the mix a bit lmao

Love it

Glad you like it

Will definitely check that out at some point my dude, cheers!

Thank you! I actually had a wind sample playing through the whole thing to give it a bit more atmosphere

[quote=Devieus]Good use of instrumentation, very pretty notes and close to the theme. On to the points you could push this even further with. Panning: you're working with an orchestra now, which means you have sections and these sections have physical locations on stage, keep those in mind; for example put the strings a little to the left, the woodwinds to the right, percussion in the rear and brass front and center. Bonus points for a choir. Dynamics aka volume: your balance is spot on, but the entire orchestra plays all notes at the same volume aside from the intro, it's fine if you let a section mellow out for a bit at some points without killing them. Lastly, tempo: maybe the piece is too short to fully make use of it, but you could slow down a few phrases to build stronger tension or extra relief. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have to use these points for my own work.[/quote] Cheers for the feedback my dude, definitely have been tweaking velocity since then and it's helped tons! [quote=Mission Crossing]Sweet tune! Didn’t think it was too THICC; a very solid and memorable overworld theme :)[/quote] Thank you <3 Was worried I overcompressed the mix a bit lmao [quote=kaedo sevaada][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/izUQicEc7K3mw/giphy.gif[/img][/quote] Love it <3 [quote=Jim Wood]Heroic and anthemic. The definitions of THICC I googled don't seem to fit at all ::)[/quote] Glad you like it <3 [quote=hieme]That intro is the perfect way to create a wide sense of space - reminds me of Minimal by Isak Bjorn Hedlund. Great job with the orchestral sounds, your arrangement style is really solid <3[/quote] Will definitely check that out at some point my dude, cheers! <3 [quote=orangedrink]Goodness gracious I LOVE these strings. I really need to learn how to get on this level. WOW. So beautiful. What was that sound at the end? [quote=Jim Wood]The definitions of THICC I googled don't seem to fit at all ::)[/quote] LOL JIM [/quote] Thank you! I actually had a wind sample playing through the whole thing to give it a bit more atmosphere ;)